Writers block

[Shawn Gambrel]

My new band I'm in is trying to make a set list of all songs that we write. I've been working on one for a few days now and can't get off the Second verse and would like some help. It's a rocking tune kinda like " just a swinging " by john Anderson with that echord.

Here is a little of what I got

She was staring at me from across the room
So I walked on over flashed her a smile

I can't finish that line :/ can anyone help me?

[OldSausage]

She was staring at me from across the room
So I walked on over flashed her a smile
She took a good look at my F5G
Then she passed me a card with a number to dial

[JeffD]

A song writer friend of mine likes this site:

http://www.lyricideas.com/

[Michael Bridges]

Or how about:
She was staring at me from across the room
So I walked on over flashed her a smile
She told me her name was Annalee
So I bought her a drink and we talked for a while
(Been wanting to use that name in a lyric for years!)

Maybe:
I was never a believer in first impressions
But something about her made me stay for a while

[OldSausage]

She was staring at me from across the room
So I walked on over flashed her a smile
She took a good look at my F5G
And adjusted my nut action with her nail file

Luthier woman! She's never lazy
Luthier woman! Her inlay drives me crazy!

[Mike Bunting]

She was staring at me from across the room
So I walked on over flashed her a smile
From across the room she rolled her eyes at me
So I rolled them back for all to see.

[tmsweeney]

I must admit I was taken by her style
or
sure was hoping for a number to dial
or
she sure stood out from the rank and file
or
didn't think I had a chance was I in denial?
or
I knew this was gonna be more than a trial
or
if I had any money I'd have given her a pile ( well that line should come after the part about the eventual divorce)

[William Smith]

She was staring at me from across the room
So I walked on over flashed her a smile

I can't finish that line :/ can anyone help me?[/QUOTE]

When we went out together
she gave me a smile

That's the nice version ya pry don't want to hear the nasty version I was thinkin!

[Michael Bridges]

And adjusted my nut action with her nail file
Really!?!?

[OldSausage]

And adjusted my nut action with her nail file
Really!?!?

Hey, it could happen.

[Shawn Gambrel]

Well I used Anna Lou. This is what I got

She was staring at me from across room.
Walked on over spin her around, she said her name was Anna Lou.

Now on to the next verse if I can think of it

[clobflute]

Late joining the writers party

Now on to the next verse if I can think of it

"She was staring at me
Woohoo....across the room
Cool girl staring at me
Across a country mile
"How do you do?!"
Up I came
To Anna Lou
That sweet ol'
Anna Lou
Hey honey
You put my name on file"








PS - I failed poetry and romance in high school :D