Very First Attempt at Writing Music

[Chiff]

Hi,
Here is a tune that I wrote today. It is my very first attempt at writing music. Please be kind to me. If you would like to change it, feel free to do so.

Cheers

X:1
T:Laughing Kye
C:Chiff
M:4/4
Q:180
L:1/4
K:G
|:G B d B|A d B |A G G2 |d B G2 |A B d d |B A B2 |A G A B |d B d2 :|: \
G B d B |A G G A |B d e e |B A G2 |B d B G |B G A2 |B d d B | A G G2 :| ]

[mandolin breeze]

Congrats Chiff . . . Not so important how your first tune is judged, only that it was your first tune and not your last. Good luck and keep 'em coming!

[HonketyHank]

Sounds good to me. Kye will be proud of it and you. A great start.

[Chiff]

Thanks for your kind comments. Feel free to to advise me how to make it better if you wish.

Kye is 2 year old one of these Parrots and they live for 80-100 years.