My first composition

[Chris Travers]

Hey all!

My brother and I just finished writing our first song. Please critique... It's called "The Yankee's Jig"

http://www.indabamusic.com/people/668195321

click on the link below my pic...

Enjoy!
crazylotrfan

[El Greco]

not bad amigo! add a c part, different octave, then come back to a part...ya know...BAM!

[Bob Wiegers]

cool. I agree adding a 3rd part would round it out a lot. keep it up.