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Chris Travers
Apr-03-2008, 2:56pm
Hey all!

My brother and I just finished writing our first song. Please critique... It's called "The Yankee's Jig"

http://www.indabamusic.com/people/668195321

click on the link below my pic...

Enjoy!
crazylotrfan

El Greco
Apr-03-2008, 3:01pm
not bad amigo! add a c part, different octave, then come back to a part...ya know...BAM!

Bob Wiegers
Apr-03-2008, 3:21pm
cool. I agree adding a 3rd part would round it out a lot. keep it up.